Discuss here, its a toned down version of anouther RP, go ahead and try to comprehend it.

Here's the plot.
A mystic crystal, small on size but big on power, hurdling through space has hit the earth's atmosphere, the intense heat caused it to split and fragment and fall into the earth.

A major city, New Alastia, exists on Earth, it exists over the ruins of London, which was destroyed in 2012. In the city great coruption spreads, and crime rate is high. This city is the capital of Earth. There will be room for development later, for now lets think.

No cliched charachters, meaning: Dark, brooding, troubled past. None of that, ACTUAL GOOD AND DEVELOPED CHARACHTERS.

Also, this being a serious RP, no posts like this.

Thats dumb. And remember guys, don't enter this unless your confident in your RP abilities and charachter making.

SO LETS PLAN IT OUT....GO!.

This looks certainly interesting enough, however the character I posted in the character thread is so old and crappy I wouldn't want to use it in this.

I'll go, using saghir'a, Janus, Quetzacoatl. (He can help your character, mine's part evil. Quetzacoatl can't fight, he is immortal, but takes pleasure in defying Janus. He usually helps the opponent win.)

That post right there is a shinging example of how NOT to make a good charchter. There is no room for charachter development, no charachter build up, so no immortality, no general destructiveness, tone him down, psot the DESCRIPTIVE bio that has notthing to do with Metroid, and here's my guy. Please follow the template when posting your charachter.

Name: RX-3657-324-12-ALPHA-2

Aliases: Dominik Gherheard

Age: Around 20

Species: Sub-human species, bred for taking orders

Sex: male

Height: 5 ft 11

Weight 205 pounds (due to machinary)

Place of Origin: Earth

Appearance: Dominik’s is clad in cybernetic plating; it covers his lower legs, torso, and the left half of his face. Dominik’s left side of his face is dull chrome in color with a dimly glowing red eye, It was fused to his face to allow excess data to be processed mentally. He is decently muscular, but his chest is covered in Metal. Dominik has red hair and blue eyes, he has no left ear, instead he has a audio recorder and transceiver to communicate with other slave humans. Dominik has thrusters mounted in his heels, and a series of smaller thrusters on the bottom of his feet. The purpose of this is to allow high speed movement over almost any terrain. The metal is chrome in color, but has rusted in some parts due to his time underground, he does not function at his highest grade anymore.

Weaponry and armaments: Besides the technology mentioned above, Dominik has totally mechanical arms, they have the appearance of being muscular and covered in metal plates. His fingers can extend to 6 inches in length and are razor sharp. Also, concealed laser cannons can extend from the arms, and fire small balls of energy (short range weapon), although efective, these guns have a very slow reload time. The arms contain several cable ports, from these ports cables can extent that link him to machinery, giving him control over low grade technology, because while he was burried, technology became diffrent enough so that Dominik couldn;t control it as eaisily, his cables only extend 3 feet in total and allow up to 10 minuets of control before he has to stop. Due to circuit corsion. Also his armor plating wasn't that thick do begin with, meant to stop bullets and blastproof against homemade bombs. Due to corosion its a llittle lacking.

Abilities: Being a human, Dominik has no abilities besides the ones artificially given, he can survive great pressure (actual in terms of things like water), and operate for extended times under stress and without tiring. He also requires little food and sleep and his waste systems are self contained. Although being mostly mechanical he does sink in water, also he can run out of power, when this happens he cannot move and must wait a period of 3 hours to recharge. Also his armor plating wasn't that thick do begin with, meant to stop bullets and blastproof against homemade bombs. Due to corosion its a llittle lacking. Dominik's booster s are fine for the most part, but due to outdated fuel cell, speed is limited to 4o MPH, until he can get a new cell.

Bio: Dominik is a sub-human, a species of Human bred for taking orders, Dominik was a infantry class model and was no different then the other hundreds of other models. On the front lines of WWIII his processor was damaged and his systems froze, he was left where he was, in the sea of enemy bodies. About 50 years after he was dug up, by archeloligists and Dominik is now tryin to find his place in the world, its not always that smooth though...

And could someone besides me contribute to the actual PLANNING of the topic, I'd like input.

Screw this. I said Saghir'a. Quetzacoatl doesn't fight, Janus is not fighting. Read the RP character, theres saghir'a's profile, he isn't immortal. Plenty of "characer build-up", I even said he was weak. <_<

You contradicted yourself, you say he doesn't fight, then how does he help the opponant win. Also, if the people are fighting, they would all be opponats, and thus getting all help from your little god.

this sounds good, I think I will use kail, I'll add more description!

Then i'll forget Quetzacoatl, geez.

Whatever, just post your charachter.
I got some more idea's.
. Some crystals are possesed by the goverment, used to power generators and giving power to Alastia.
. Some of the charachters participating will have the crystals imbedded in them, for the most part, they wont know.
. Also, we need some villans, I'll make anouther charachter who will be evil.

How 'bout Janus? Black cloak, white masks on both sides of his head.. long thin hair, leader of the group I forgot the name of.

Name: Saghir'a
Species: Humanoid
Status/Occupation: Inheritor of Samedi's soul, on probhation. Out to prove himself.
*Height: ??
*Weight: ??
Age: 13
Eye Color: Blue/Green
Skin Color: Light Brown
hair color: red/Gold
Home Planet: Earth
Weapons: Summoner chain (Neck chain.)
Other Equipment: Shotgun, Silver Chain
Personality: Thoughtful/Hysterical (sometimes)/ Bloodthirsty (Sometimes)
Weakness: He is ashamed of his power, very weak. Gets beaten up a lot. Feels incredible fear/pain.
Special Attacks: none

Notes: Part of the "Or'ticaiuan" group, finding humanoids to enherit souls of Gods. Inherited Baron Samedi's soul at an early age, he is still learning how to control himself.