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Title: The necklace
Description: An epic adventure


mirror samus - March 19, 2007 08:19 PM (GMT)
Hello! this is a new RP (obviosly) I cant spell well. anyway, It is a group of 3-8 people trying to find necklace pieces . They have awsome powers! you first start out with the necklace peice and an all force stone AKA A.F.S. remember that you cannot use the necklace without the 2.

takes place on earth, and there are seven pieces not counting the necklace piece. chek the weapons section for referance to what it looks like

Sign ups sign upS

I will use loyd

Gearmaster - March 20, 2007 01:39 AM (GMT)
I'll join, jus to own you in a non-charachter controlling way. I'll be using Almara
http://rprofiles.nexisonline.net/index.php/Alamara
Thats right guys, a FEMALE charachter.
*gasps from crowd*

mirror samus - March 20, 2007 10:30 PM (GMT)
cool cool, but you should consider that you only have ONE piece of the necklace at the start, Loyd uses his wind stone as a primary weapon from the necklace in ALL RPs, so keep that in mind and don't say I'm cheating!

someone else join, I need at least 3 people.

P.S. This is a serious RP

Rewrite - March 21, 2007 12:14 AM (GMT)
3 people? Heck, I'll join. I'll be using Envy.
QUOTE

Name: Envy
Species: Homuncurus
Status/Occupation: the first homuncurus
*Height: 5*10
*Weight: 120lb
Age: 400 Years
Eye Color: Purple
Skin Color: Light
Home Planet: Amestris
Abilities: Shapeshifting
Personality: Is extremely sadistic, and hates all human life.
Weaknesses: parts of his remains , playing with his head(E.G. make fun of him 'cause of his father 'n' stuff) , His heel , any weaknesses that his morphs may have.


So wait, when I start I have an A.F.K and a necklace piece? What good are pieces for? :/ WHat's the setting? What kind of things are on there?(Tanks, machines, etc).

Maybe you should provide more information first....

Gearmaster - March 21, 2007 12:35 AM (GMT)
Fine, Almara can wear the piece of the necklace on a necklace, as jewlrey. Also, if this is a serios RP, then noone must charachter control. Also...Rewrite, why not just make your own charachter instead of using one thats already done? And its spelled Homunculus.

mirror samus - March 21, 2007 08:44 PM (GMT)
LOL I told him that in a PM. well Do you want to start??

Gearmaster - March 21, 2007 11:40 PM (GMT)
Yeah sure, although it being your RP, I'll give you the honor.

Rewrite - March 22, 2007 12:46 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Gearmaster @ Mar 20 2007, 04:35 PM)
Also...Rewrite, why not just make your own charachter instead of using one thats already done? And its spelled Homunculus.

No.. Envy is registered to FUNiMation and SquareEnix... but I can still use it. And no, it can be spelled either way, Homunculus or Homuncurus. It doesn't matter, it's the same thing(seriously, get some facts down before you start to argue with me. <__<).

QUOTE (mirror samus on Mar 21 2007 @ 12:44 PM)
LOL I told him that in a PM.


Um... no you didn't. You said, "I belive its spelled homoguli." And I already replied to your presumptious PM. I told you that it was Homunculus; or Homuncurus. Then I told you that "Homunculi" was the plural form of "Homunculus."

Yeah, this just put me under more stress. Thanks for that.

Gearmaster - March 22, 2007 01:47 AM (GMT)
No need for stress, just making a sugestion, as if yu make your own charachter you cna do whatever with it and have no limits.

mirror samus - March 22, 2007 09:23 PM (GMT)
OOC: yeah your right rewrite sorry.

IC: "finally, I got it right. Now I can use my necklace to generate a wind blade!"

Loyd turns around and takes a look at his suroundings.

"huh? whats that? I guess I should investigate!"

Loyd runs off toward a hill next to an old house. Little did he know that this single action would bring 2 more people into his journey for the seven elemental peices of the necklace. Now there fates were intwined.

Gearmaster - March 23, 2007 12:37 AM (GMT)
Almara was staring at her floor, fiddling with the piece of jewelry on her necklace before letting it slip down her shirt again. She stood up and walked over to her quarter’s small kitchen. A picture hung on the wall of her and Ergos, standing together with their arms around each others shoulders smileing, on the day they claimed an imperial vault, along with their troops behind them. She pushed the button of her coffee maker and a steaming cup of coffee flowed out into the waiting cup. She took a long draw of it, draining half the cup at once and panting a bit from the lack of breath. Almara threw the paper cup away and walked towards the bedroom, her shoeless feet padding on the floor. She looked in the mirror, she had a little spot on her cheek, she wiped it off and looked at herself, her breasts bulged in her shirt and she looked at herself, her blond hair falling at her shoulders. Suddenly her communicator rang, she took it off her hip and put it in her ear.
“This is Captain Almara.”
“Its Ergos.”
“Oh hi honey, how’s it going?”
“Pretty good, I’m just fighting a bunch of Omega’s, no challenge at all, you?”
“Oh nothing really, I finished my shift and I’m just chilling, but if your bu-“
The warning siren blared.
“Catch ya later Goey.”
“I don’t like bei-“ Almara cut him off.
Almara ran out the door, putting her over shirt on. Soldiers were running the warp chamber, empire soldiers were attacking London. Almara ran to the chamber, clearing the way of base civilians who had stepped out of their doors to see what all the commotion was. Almara got to the chamber, other divisional commanders were leading their troops through the warp gates. Almara got to the front of hers and received her orders from the base commander Diedra. She walked towards the gate when a spark crackled from the side of the gate, she paid no attention to it and walked through, she stepped through and arrived inside a house on a hill. She pulled out her chronometer and checked the date, 1990.
“Perfect, just perfect, I’m more then 9,000 years behind schedule. But at any rate, its nice to be here, I havn't been here since I was eight.”
Almara looked out the window, a young man was running towards the house.
“Wonderful.” She though and walked towards the rooms door.

mirror samus - March 23, 2007 01:03 AM (GMT)
The ground began to rumble as it began to split.
"Woah, what the?" Then he saw them, motion sensors.
"Great, I get out of a bad situation, and I'm back in one. Oh well, I geuss I c-"
The ground broke up into small pieces and a large metal panel rose up, and on maybe about 120 soldiers. Sarcasticly loyd says:
"Oh no! whatever shall I do?" he raises his hand and somthing under his shirt begins to glow then a huge blast of wind spontaniously came and pushed at least four layers away. Only the heavy artillery remained.
"well, at least I can test my wind blade."

Gearmaster - March 23, 2007 01:47 AM (GMT)
Almara felt the earth shake a bit, she hurried down the stairs and opened the door to the man wiping the soldiers formation out, leaving the rear cannons exposed.
"Well, I can't just leave him there."
The cannon fired their shots, she held out her hand, which glowed with a whitish light. The cannon shells stopped in mid air all movement stopped, they then fell to the ground, Almara lifted her right arm, she unwrapped the bandeges around it and flexed her arm. A nozzel extended from her emchanical hand and she rushed forward, a small flame whisping from the hole. She activated her ancient strength and jumped into the air, unleashing 3,000C blast of fire from one hand and a kinetic blast from the other, utterly destroying the cannons. After landing she looked at the soldiers.
"Russian gear. I must be in the S.U."
Almara withdrew the nozzle and rewrapped her arm, she then remembered the young man. Almara straightened up and walked toward him.

(OOC: Why not try making your posts a bit longer M.S.)

mirror samus - March 23, 2007 03:13 AM (GMT)
(OOC: ok)

IC: "Hmm? Is that a fire gem? No it isn't, my all force stone would have reacted. I wonder who she is?" Loyd looks at Almara freaquently waving his hand to whisk away constantly running towards him.

"I don't have time for this, I'm leaving" loyd then jumps off into the distants with increadable strength and height, almost higher than Almara.

"see ya later!" As loyd flys through the air something hits him in the head. A large gate of sortes.

"Hmm? Amazing, I wonder if it leads to another temple? If then I will have two stones! I will be able to have combined power! Oh wait, no" Closer inspection revealed that it was just a milatary base. it seemed very interesting too.

"misewell take a look! lets see, how do I do that thing again? Oh yeah. DIWN MELG FOETYA KELTOK!" Loyd was now made of air. As an invisible entity loyd easily slips past security, and finds his way into a maximum security room. there lies a man or a girl? Loyd couldn't tell. Long green hair, crazy eyes. Who was this person?

<huh? is that?!> loyd looks at it's chest and see's a necklace, with an all force piece, could this be? there were two?

the last thing loyd thinks is to reapear, but it that is probably a HUGE mistake!"

Rewrite - March 23, 2007 04:12 AM (GMT)
OOC: Longer? How come?
IC:

A dark shadow walked onto a red room. The shadow ran and ran.

Then he ran past a man with a pistol in his belt, "Hey! You! Who're you?!"

Envy stopped. He grinned as he saw the man, "I don't know. Who're you?"

"That is none of your business," said the man. "Then it is none of yours."

Envy shape-shifted into a dragon of immense mass. The man was scared.

"Ah! What do y-y-y-ou want?!" said the man. "I want... THE NECKLACE! AHAHAHAH." Envy bit at the man's head, and shifted to his preferred form, the look of a young boy, with a look of a young girl.

"That's better... now, for the necklace." Envy walked away to where the rest of the rest of the buildings in the Military Base were. He was surprised it was so big, but not impressed. He was ready to destroy.

Sourcebandit - March 23, 2007 05:12 AM (GMT)
Hm...seems interesting enough. I'm in. I didn't see any particular character profile template, so I'm just going to create my own, if that's alright with you.

QUOTE
Name: Aveil Bloodmoon
Age: 26
Sex: Female
Weapons: She is quite skilled with a katana, and she's also proficient with magic
Other Details: She has a deep hatred for bats.


Aveil Bloodmoon...a young priestess of 26 years. Her dark eyes were tinted with a mysterious purple hue. It was once said that her gaze could pierce the strongest armor...a clever metaphor, but nothing more. She slowly opened her eyes as she felt the heat of the rising sun on her face. She looked out into the horizon and prepared for the work that must be done, but not before a thorough washing. She stood up and walked down the winding stone path to the spring.

On the shores of the cool pool, she prepared for her morning bath. He untied the ribbon holding back her mid-back length black hair and let it fall down over her shoulders. She then untied the sash holding her garments on her body, and let them fall to the ground. She stood there, naked, for a moment.


(That's all I can do now, sorry)

Gearmaster - March 23, 2007 07:00 AM (GMT)
“Perfect, and I was going to see what he was doing. And why he was staring at my chest, the pervert.” Almara said to her self, putting her hand on her hip.
Almara walked back over to the fallen troops, they were waking up, Almara took no notice of them and knelt down to look at a control panel that must have been the platforms control. She pressed it and descended down, some troops had grown restless and were waking up in a stupor, Almara got up and walked over to a soldier, she knelt down to his level and grabbed his neck. She kept pressure on it till he was back asleep. The lift had reached the bottom, Almara turned around only to find herself staring at a few hundred armed guards, all their guns pointed at her. Almara raised her right arm, and opened the nozzle she shot her flamethrower, cutting a swath down the middle of the Soviet soldiers, yet they remained unfazed, Almara jumped into the crowd and attempted to fire another fire blast, but nothing happened
*chk, chk*
The flamethrower sounded, meaning its flame generators were empty. Almara tried walking slowly back over to the control panel, the soldier cocked their guns and approached her. Putting her in handcuffs, and taking her away, they placed her in a cell and locked the door, shutting off almost all light. Almara sat there, wondering how she was going to get out of here. Suddenly she heard a bang, she hoped it as someone coming to open the door and she stood up, but instead instead the small port hole shut.
Almara was feeling drained of energy, something was disrupting her natural power. She wondered what it could be…

(OOC: ALSO, please notice the words in my previous posts such as, Russia, soviet, 1990, SOVIET. Since a original area was never established, its Russia, deal with it.)

Rewrite - March 23, 2007 08:35 PM (GMT)
OOC: @SourceBandit
http://z3.invisionfree.com/Metroid_Headqua...p?showtopic=111 <-- Character Template

@Gearmaster
Wait, are we in the same area? I'm confused on that note.

IC:

Envy had just finished killing a couple of the gaurds. Then he realized something else was comin' his way.

"Ha! You insects fail at fighting with me. I don't have time for this," Envy shifted into a giant dragon, and chomped through the many soldiers. He shifted back, and something caught his eye.

He walked toward a building that had a vast number of weird symbols. When he touched the wall, and felt a chill down his spine, "Heh, looks like I found what I was looking for."


Gearmaster - March 23, 2007 11:46 PM (GMT)
(OOC: Um, yes we are in the same area Mr. Rewrite, a base/ruins area of Russia, so is MS.)

(IC) Almara was sitting in the corner, feeling weak. She racked her brain for any sort of solution, but she could think of nothing. She fondled her necklace in her fingers.
“Yeah this good luck necklace works perfectly.” Almara thought to herself.
“Wait what am I saying, I can’t get all weak and mopey, what would Ergos say?”
Almara stood up, her sleeve caught on a piece of metal sticking out from the wall.
‘”What’s this?” She thought.
“Almara knelt down and reached into her pocket and pulled out a small box, she opened it and felt for the contacts inside it, she took one out and gingerly put it in and blinked a lot to get used to the new vision. Even with the contact it was still dark, Almara could now see that her sleeve had caught on a small grate, she took it off and looked inside, she reached her arm in and felt around for anything, inside was a small object. She grabbed it only to find it stuck. She opened a small compartment on her arm and took out a small pill, she put it in the grate and winked her eye. The contact in the eye sent a signal to the pill and it exploded in a small burst. Almara reached in again and grabbed the stone, it glowed faintly. Almara felt weak just holding it, this must be what was neutralizing her powers. Almara walked over to the door, and reached into her arm for more blasting pills, unfortunately she had none, she wasn’t expecting this situation. Almara knocked on the door, it opened, an armed guard opened the door.
“What is it?” He said rather gruff.
Almara chucked the stone at his face as hard as she could and the guard fell to the floor. Almara picked the stone up again, when she did, she felt the drain again, but of even more curiosity, her necklace resonated with it and started shaking, her necklace fired a blast of fire, melting a hole in the wall and burning a hole in her shirt.
“Holy Crap!” Almara gasped and dropped the stone amongst the wreckage.
Almara ran out and through the hole, on the other side was a man staring at the wall she had blasted through. Almara looked at the strangley dressed man’s short shorts and odd shirt, Almara disregarded it and felt her strength returning, now that the stone was gone. Almara approached a heavy steel door, she blinked and the contact lense switched to x-ray mode. Through the door was a squadron of guards, most likely coming to attend to whatever had made all the commotion, or her. Almara fired a blast of kinetic energy at the door and blasted it off its hinges. Most likely flattening a few guards. Almara watched their movements and became distracted to the obvious fact that they were aiming at her. Almara was in a bad situation, guards in front and guards behind.
“Now what?’ Almara thought to herself.

Rewrite - March 24, 2007 12:12 AM (GMT)
"What the hell?!" The blast nearly blew off Envy's head. He saw more guards coming towards him. He jumped as high as he could toward them, and stomped on the adjacent ground.

The guards were shooken and fell to their knees. He looked at their scared faces and thought they weren't worth it. Instead, he just kicked them in the face and left.

Envy walked about the building for a minute or two. When he finally found a proper entrance, he went through. Inside the building was dust of every kind. He couldn't believe the stone wasn't there.

Envy was pissed, he started kicking things inside the building. Finally, he snapped and shifted to a human-sized serpent. He saw a figure that he couldn't see clearly in his snake-eyes, so he came closer to it.

mirror samus - March 25, 2007 11:49 PM (GMT)
through all that was happening kail was just following and now the person had thermal vision. Just because I'm air, doesnt mean I don't have heat? loyd snapped out of air mode and activated wind blade.

"D-dont move! or you will be in trouble!" loyd knew he couldn't kill her er it, all three necklaces would have to be used to open the last temple. somehow he had to get them on his team-that or get the other necklaces.

"whats your name? I can help you get the other pieces!"

Rewrite - March 26, 2007 12:12 AM (GMT)
Envy shifted back to his human form.

"Why should I tell you? Are you out to get me too?!" Envy then went on to kicking the mysterious person.

mirror samus - March 26, 2007 12:21 AM (GMT)
"uhh, just let me talk" loyd started to read its mind "your a Homuncurus right? Well I know how you hate humans! I do too!" loyd is lying now " I'm not human, I'm elemental!"
Loyd was desperate, and scared. would Envy buy it?


Rewrite - March 26, 2007 12:29 AM (GMT)
Envy stared long and hard onto this "elemental" being.

"Hm. So tell me, where can I find some necklaces?"

mirror samus - March 26, 2007 12:34 AM (GMT)
"The pieces aren't actually necklaces, they just kind of float to the necklace piece and I have the other wind stone you can have it." Loyd takes a green stone out of his pocket and hands it envy.
"together, when all three necklaces are together, they open a door to the last temple, that puts there power back together! When all together, they create a time control power. However, it only works with the right technique. I don't know it." Loyd stares at envy then rises up off the ground with his mental power.
"but there is a human that has the third necklace. Her name is Almara"

Rewrite - March 26, 2007 12:48 AM (GMT)
Envy looked puzzled. "Who is this 'Almara'?" Envy was still puzzled, and just began to walk away from Loyd, "You comin'?" Envy then jumped a great distance to a pillar, and followed to other pillars.

mirror samus - March 26, 2007 01:02 AM (GMT)
Loyd followed close behind and started to feel a bit of sympathy for envy, all the things she went through, after all he had been reading envy's mind the whole time. They arrived at the destination and just as that happened something caught Loyd's eye. It was a woman in a dress, he looked at envy and she smiled. He read there minds and quickly knew why. Then something
shot him in the neck. He fell to the ground and didn't get up. It was a dart, marked 'destabalizer'. They were used to shut down any kind of being so that they could be tested and experimented on. Then a man jumped down and went to grab Loyd saying something like "If I can't make a non crazy homuncurus from scratch then I will make one from an already living person." Loyd could still hear and see, and when he heard that his eyes widened. a few seconds later the man got up and saw envy, then he coughed and dissapeared

OOC: thats a twist!

Rewrite - March 26, 2007 01:12 AM (GMT)
Envy laughed

mirror samus - March 26, 2007 01:15 AM (GMT)
Lust jumped out to envy and said "what happened? who was that?"

ooc: I will be a while.

Rewrite - March 26, 2007 01:27 AM (GMT)
Envy looked at Lust, "Aha, No one." Now Envy had a serious face on.

"This person, 'Loyd' says he can help me, or us, find where there are more necklaces. I however, plan to take all the necklaces for myself."

Lust: Oh? Well, I don't need any Necklaces, I just need enough power to generate-

Lust stopped. Something hit her in the back. A man had stabbed her in the back.

"Quit clowning around, hurry up and revive!"

mirror samus - March 26, 2007 01:59 AM (GMT)
lust revived and killed the man and they left. a couple of days later they saw something. it was loyd and he was diferent and envy could tell what happened... OOC: I give temp control to you

Rewrite - March 26, 2007 02:26 AM (GMT)
OOC: Yes! I can now kill you. =D

"Hm? Well if it isn't Loydy! How ya doin' squirt?" Envy was about to give him his good ol' salute, kicking him. Loyd dodged, and Envy felt something he hadn't felt in a while.

mirror samus - March 26, 2007 02:33 AM (GMT)
OOC: sorry I just control lost, I had to use my PSP to right!

IC: "I know what your thinking. I can read your mind. Why did you let him take me? no matter, and NO you won't kill me so get rid of that thought."
Loyd stared at envy and gave it a strange look, then he said.
"I know how you feel now." Then he gestured to leave and he jumped off looked at them and waved to them to come.

Lust: "Nothing huh? tell me everything"

Rewrite - March 26, 2007 02:55 AM (GMT)
Envy was puzzled.

"Man that guy is weird. When did I want to kill him? Hell if I care. I just want the pieces."

Lust: "Eh I see, well, I'll be seeing you Envy, I have an errand to attend to."

Lust left, and Envy silently followed Loyd.

Eventually, he followed Loyd to a shrine. Envy didn't know what it was for, but decided he should still follow Loyd

Gearmaster - March 26, 2007 03:39 AM (GMT)
The guards near Almara had long since fled, Almara had been watching the two other talk violently. Almara kept hearing talk of a necklace, seemed valuable. Ten she remembered, her necklace, more importantly she remembered the fire balst it blasted, she grabbed her neck. It was gone, it must have fallen off in her escape. The two had started to leave, Almara dropped from from her position from the ceiling where she had been sitting. Alamara opened the top of her mechanical finger and fired a tracing dart from her finger, an untraceable microscopic dart that bonds to the targets atoms. Almara looked at her wrist communicator, a small holomap showed their position. Almara followed them, along the way a few guards fired at her, the bullets stopped in mid air around her, adding their kinetic energy to her power. Almara walked back to the wall rubble, she looked through it and found her necklace.
“Can’t lose my necklace, otherwise our link would be broken.” Almara said quietly as she thought of Ergos.
Almara retied the necklace back around her neck, brushing her hair out of the way. Almara looked at the map again, the target had moved about 2 miles due north. Almara followed the rout they had taken to the shine, from the looks of things they had already entered the shrine. Almara unwrapped her mechanical arm and decided that subtlety was no longer an option if these necklaces were as powerful as she though. She took out the strange stone, she had restored enough power to resist its effects of the A.F.S. stone, she crushed it to dust and charged energy in her hand, and she then fired a large blast of energy through the shrine walls

Rewrite - March 26, 2007 03:45 AM (GMT)
Loyd was possibly inside the Shrine. He didn't even know where the hell he was. He entered... realizing... "Damnit! It was fake! He just made that fake of him so I couldn't follow where he was really going!"

Envy continued to walk in the shrine, when one of the walls exploded.

"What the hell?!" Envy dodged, and hid behind a large pillar. He saw a girl come in, and he was ready to attack.

Gearmaster - March 26, 2007 04:15 AM (GMT)
Almara jumped into the collapsing wall. She caught a large piece of wall and chucked it at the two men. She fired a combine blast of fire and energy directly at the two.

(OOC: How did Envu dodge if he didn't know it was coming?)

Rewrite - March 26, 2007 04:40 AM (GMT)
(OOC: I said he dodged. But I didn't say he dodged anything. He just stealthed away from the exploded wall, and btw, I said Loyd was a fake. <__<)

Envy was pissed. He saw the girl firing things. When he saw one was going for him, he shifted into a tiny rat, and shifted back.

"Hey! YOU! WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE?! DO YOU HAVE A DEATH WISH?! PREPARE TO DIE!!"

Envy shifted into a giant serpent, bigger than the one he shifted onto before. Envy opened his giant mouth and was preparing to chop on the tiny Almara.

Gearmaster - March 26, 2007 04:55 AM (GMT)
The man had shifted form again, this time into a giant serpent. Lunging for her, Almara’s ancient reflexes allowed her to dodge the strike and she jumped on to his head, planting a small explosive on it and then she jumped off.

(OOC: You can’t say Loyde was a fake unless he says it was a fake, that’s character controlling.)

Rewrite - March 26, 2007 05:03 AM (GMT)
OOC: He said I get "temp" control. And what does it really matter? As long as the story gets through. <__<

Envy then shifted back to human and did an old trick. He took the bomb, through it at Almara, and drop kicked her. He didn't do it fast enough. The bomb went off.




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